Peer Sharing Reflection

Peer sharing was definitely a positive experience for me. I helped me to see where and how I could improve my writing. Also, reading other people's writing opened me up to new ways that I could express what happens in my memoir. All the feedback I received was helpful. The questions people asked helped me to include more detail in my second draft. I tried to include more visionary detail to help my peer readers almost feel like they were in the scene with me.